[Report This]Date: 26/08/09 11:48:57 am Title: Epilogue
getting figured out cuz of a loafer would suck... lol
Date: 21/03/08 03:44:38 pm Title: Epilogue
Wow! Perfect spelling. I really loved your story. You know,your writing sounds like in the Artemis Fowl books.I liked how it was very descriptive because i t helps you get the images in your head.You know what i mean??
[Report This]Date: 31/12/07 10:41:06 pm Title: Epilogue
Great Prequel! I love it!
[Report This]Date: 14/12/07 12:56:30 am Title: Prologue
*Looks at first review*
Author's Response: Thanks for the Stonehenge thing. But in the British version of the books (the one with characters in front), the first page of the book has like a logo of an owl with a pouch and underneath it says aurum potestas est instead of aurum est potestas. I noticed that the books say one thing, whilst the fan websites say another...that's what confuses me so much...but I just go by the book. I thought that maybe Latin was different from English and they change the orders or something since I don't learn it. Anyways, thanks for the complement!!!
Thats the same with me!!!!! It's sooo... Confusing!! And really annoying!!! But apparently (my friend does Latin), it is Aurum potestas est, because the verb goes last. But i don't know... The books i have also say aurum potestas est...
OMG!!! I just searched on google for a link to the crest and I found this!!!!! It looks abso-freaking-lutely awesome!!!!!!!!! http://www.planetartemis.com/motto.jpg Oh, and the motto's on their haha. Man Im; amped for this site now!!!!
OH!!! And by the way. Absolutely awesome story!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/02/07 04:12:59 pm Title: Epilogue
How Artemis Fowl got the vial of holy water in the first place to get the BOOK from the sprite in the first place.
Author's Response: Sorry? I don't get what you mean...could you clarify it?
Date: 16/01/07 10:32:05 am Title: Chapter 2: Tara
Great Style! Very much like Eoin Colfer's!
Author's Response: Thanks alot! I always try to adapt my style of writing to match that of the author I am trying to imitate. Like when writing AF fan fictions, I imitate Colfer.
Anyways, my own style still needs improving (I haven't really found out what it really is yet...).
Thanks again anyways :)
Date: 26/12/06 05:56:54 am Title: Chapter 1: Journey
Great fic. But, I also noticed some errors in your fic.
One- The Fowl family saying is written "aurum est potestas" not "aurum potestas est". This is because, if you translate the saying from Latin to English, your spelling would say "Gold Power is". If you spelled it my way and translated it, it would actually say the Fowl saying.
Two- Stonehenge is one word; not two.
I still liked your fic, besides the mistakes, it was wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks for the Stonehenge thing. But in the British version of the books (the one with characters in front), the first page of the book has like a logo of an owl with a pouch and underneath it says aurum potestas est instead of aurum est potestas. I noticed that the books say one thing, whilst the fan websites say another...that's what confuses me so much...but I just go by the book. I thought that maybe Latin was different from English and they change the orders or something since I don't learn it. Anyways, thanks for the complement!!!