[Report This]Date: 26/08/11 04:14:57 pm Title: Arrival
Excellent, It could have been written by Eoin Colfer himself!
Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment!!! I'm glad people are still reading this after so much time.
;)
Date: 08/03/11 01:08:13 am Title: Spin
This is very good so far :) I'm only up to chapter two but I can tell you def have a handle on narrative. Good job. I was delighted to see a table of contents longer than several chapters, and I'm looking forward to reading this throughout the next week or so. Look for reviews from me!
Author's Response: Well hi there. I'll admit I haven't been on in a while. I'm glad you're enjoying my story, it seems like forever ago when I wrote it. Actually this is my first fan fiction, so thank you for the compliment. I hope to see other reviews from you or others in the future, good luck on getting through it.
;)
[Report This]Date: 16/02/10 02:40:40 am Title: LEP Report
What a professional story. I like it a lot, Spin. Genuisly thought out and categorized.
I vote "Files."
Author's Response: Oh, Thanks so much! I really appriciate you reading this, I know it's tough because it's so long and everything. I've tried to make it look good and appeal to people.
I don't know about "Files" I've tried to make it work but I'm not as inspired as I once was. We'll see if I can make anything out of it. I have two chapters up right now if you want too look at them. However as I've said, they're not as well done as The Extended Story.
;-)
Date: 16/02/10 02:26:03 am Title: New Deal
Solved*
Author's Response: Again, I get it, I need corrections. Thanks for the update.
;-)
[Report This]Date: 16/02/10 02:15:26 am Title: Wall of Dust
Medal?*
And, commas, use them. Aha. ^^b
Author's Response: Yeah I haven't gone back in and done serious corretions. I need to do that as you've just pointed out.
;-)
Date: 08/12/09 12:02:51 am Title: LEP Report
I am a man of many names... Some call me the scourge of sycophantic sissies. Others name me the destroyer of dithering delusional dunderheads. However, I call myself...a critic. YES, I HAVE RETURNED! DRAW THE CURTAINS AND DIM THE LIGHTS. FOR I HUNGER. MY ONLY SUSTENANCE IS SHATTERED DREAMS AND SPITEFUL TEARS. RUN FEARFUL FANFICTION FANATICS. BUT KNOW YOU CAN NEVER RUN FAR ENOUGH TO ESCAPE MY VINDICTIVE VERDICT. AHAHAHAHAHAH!
Author's Response: Oh nooooo, he's back! I'm so scared! (Sarcasm) OOO I can't wait to see whose life he shatters first! You should degrade yourself some and write something for this site. You’re a great writer and your use of words is very sophisticated. Enough, I believe to encapsulate Artemis Fowl quite well.
Did you see I have a new story? I need immense help on it too since I don't really know what to do for it, and am not as inspirited as I once was.
;-)
Date: 04/12/09 06:21:53 am Title: LEP Report
wow. i just finished reading this, and really, it is amazing. i need to favorite you.
Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks, I appreciate the compliment, really.
Did you like the explosion I added? The song? I thought they worked quite well. Whenever I feel like reading this over again the song's what makes me cry.
;-)
Date: 24/10/09 11:46:38 am Title: Arrival
oh okay that makes a little more sense. i was like WHAT is spin going to do to me?!
Author's Response: Again, my bad . . . even the best of us make mistakes . . .
;-)
Date: 23/10/09 03:21:17 pm Title: Arrival
to spit me? that makes me want to puke...
Author's Response: Oh sorry ^_^ I meant spite. Forgot an 'e'. Just to spite you . . .
;-)
Date: 22/10/09 09:23:16 pm Title: Arrival
hehe heyyy! i just wanna know if you, uh, hehe...wanna read my update for the bonaparte conspiracy? you can delete this review if you want
Author's Response: You kidding? I was getting ready to!! And I won't delete this . . . . just to spit you . . . ;-)