Date: 19/08/09 01:11:53 pm Title: Arrival
by whistlehigh, i'm not dissappointed, its just something I say when I'm a little alarmed. I didn't expect things to happen so suddenly, is all. I said demented cuz it was the first thing to my mind, and I felt I might as well ask a question...
Hope this helps with that. *points at my previous review*
:q
Author's Response: Oh, I was hoping that wasn't the case to begin with. I didn't expect things to end up that way anyway, it just kind'of happened. I'm not sure how to explain it. If things were to end up fine then all of the tention, and uncertainty before would all be for nothing. Anyway, my point of veiw *points*
Thanks for asking the question I love it when people ask me questions, not sure why.
;-)
Date: 16/08/09 10:55:01 pm Title: Arrival
I read it all- and I loved it but i got this dazed feeling when i finished this story, like i'd lost a bit of me, and as for questions: Why are you so demented as to write something like this?!?!?!?!? I love it, but.... whistlehigh.
Author's Response: Do you think I'm dememnted because you thought the ending was sad?
And besides, if I were to answer your question then I'd be trying to explain why I am the way I am. I'm very sure few people can answer that kind of question.
Is the whistle/sigh kind of like disapointment? Sorry about that, but if I had chosen to end it any other way I would have had to make a new story. Something like, Artemis Fowl: An Extended Battle, or something like that, you know? I would have had to ad a whole other story which would be about Opal and the Extendedes working with Artemis! I don't think people have that kind of patience, you know?
Anyway, thanks, any questions about Spin, or anything else that happened??
[Report This]Date: 16/08/09 10:44:13 pm Title: LEP Report
I... just can't think of an review to this, besides gibbering.
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I should take that as a compliment . . . .
First: Do you like my story? (Maybe I should've guessed your view by the number of stars you've given me)
How far are you along? Can you see anywhere I should improve? Any questions???
;-)
Date: 09/08/09 04:47:50 am Title: Arrival
whoa.....what happened to the summary....? (Great job,though)
Author's Response: Yeah . . . I've been thinking about writing an epilogue. I learned a bit of html code and made some changes. I wanted to make it look pretty before I put this guy back in the spotlight you know??
So you like it? Think it's a bit too overdramatic? What????
Date: 02/08/09 02:17:18 am Title: Arrival
It really ended at the snow part? Well, if you decide to end it there, then I won't stop you, cause it really gets the readers thinking hard.
Author's Response: Well All of the other "ending chapters" that I've thought of sound like the final however they don'y really reaveal anything spactacular.
Look, if you have serious questions, please, let me answer them here. There are some implied things in some of the chapters which you might have not caught.
What would your ending chapter for this story look like? What would it include/answer?
Date: 26/07/09 08:59:08 pm Title: Arrival
Wait, will there be another chapter? Because just stopping right there with the snow part.... to put it simply, that sudden ending kind of frustrates me without another chapter to clear it up *bangs head on desk* Gaaaah!!!! I need another chapter!!!
Author's Response: Really? I kind'of thought we all had decided that it would end at the snow part. (By the way your the first person to ask about the snow! :D) Well to tell you the truth that was kind'of the end. If I gave you another chapter (especially the chapter I'm thinking of then it would frustrating you more.
What kind of questions do you need answered?? Maybe I can help here . . . .
;-)
Author's Response: Really? I kind'of thought we all had decided that it would end at the snow part. (By the way your the first person to ask about the snow! :D) Well to tell you the truth that was kind'of the end. If I gave you another chapter (especially the chapter I'm thinking of then it would frustrating you more.
What kind of questions do you need answered?? Maybe I can help here . . . .
;-)
Author's Response: Really? I kind'of thought we all had decided that it would end at the snow part. (By the way your the first person to ask about the snow! :D) Well to tell you the truth that was kind'of the end. If I gave you another chapter (especially the chapter I'm thinking of then it would frustrating you more.
What kind of questions do you need answered?? Maybe I can help here . . . .
;-)
Date: 15/07/09 09:03:59 pm Title: Arrival
After reading a few of the earlier reviews I feel kind of guilty. I've actually been allowing these people to view my beautiful artistic quality of writing? Even in my reviews?! Seriously though, I might have been a bit harsh with my first review of the ending. It has its qualities. It certainly finishes it off cleanly and permanently. So i guess it was not all that bad after all. :D
Author's Response: Ohhhhhhh so sweet!!!! Oh it's so cute!!!!
On futher review myself I realize how it could be preseved as rushed. After all it would be expected that, considering my previous chapters, the ending would be long with all sorts of explainations and such. Anyway, that said, what's done is done and though I had acctually been considering writing another chapter the amount of reviews anouncing it was over were enough for me to reconsider.
It has gone on a bit long don't you agree? I have the longest story on this site, and it's three days in the middle of the desert.
Thanks for reconsidering, do you think I should add another chapter to finish it off more? It would kind of bee the same as the current "Last Chapter" however from a different point of view.
Wait, what do you mean by, "beautiful artistic quality of writing?"
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Date: 15/07/09 08:59:15 pm Title: Arrival
ANOTHER however, I like the fact that they all die. :D
Author's Response: True I knew you'd like that . . . ;-)
Date: 15/07/09 08:58:07 pm Title: LEP Report
The ending was...cheesy. Cheesy and rushed. You tried to compile the contents of some 3 or 4 chapters into 1 or 2. However, i can understand you wanted to get it out of the way. However, I was most displeased!
Author's Response: You think so? I acctually wasn't trying to get it out of the way, I appoligize because I didn't know that it gave off that kind'of feel . . . ;-) Really????
[Report This]Date: 07/07/09 10:15:39 pm Title: Arrival
I have to agree with Gun Toten Girly. It was the best of the best, and I got to see it through the end! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you both so much. I'm really happy that both of you like this story so much. I know it was long but that's just how I work.
Anyway, I'm not sure what I'm going to do now that I don't have this story, I guess I'm just going to need to make up a new one. (sounds exciting doesen't it?) I'm very happy I've gotten to spend this time with everyone and that those who have read this story have enjoyed it so much.
I hope you see me on a bookshelf someday!!! And vice vera!!!
;-)