Date: 29/01/13 12:30:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 Nameless, and then Named
You are a GREAT writer. Awsome story! PLEEEESE write more for the series.
Date: 09/06/12 03:09:39 am Title: FIN- Epilougue
I love it. You know, the second line in the last stanza would work better if you put, "of which I'll protect yo from, and keep you from seeing," rather than adding the 'ever.'
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 09/06/12 03:03:47 am Title: Chapter 32 Burn
How did she get a gun, in the last two chapters she didn't have one. She left it at the hospital, how did she suddenly have it back in her holster?
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 09/06/12 02:58:45 am Title: Chapter 31 Eternal SkyFire
No, I doubt anyone cared about him enough for that. He had his own purpose in this story, and that was to motivate Disasteress Rage.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 09/06/12 02:55:29 am Title: Chapter 30 Last stand
Ah, peeps are evil. I hate peeps. The only good thing about them is melting them in the microwave.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 09/06/12 02:53:04 am Title: Chapter 29 Sky High
This is so cool. I wonder where they got the black ink. Hmm, mysterious.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 09/06/12 02:48:13 am Title: Chapter 28 Fire Alarm
Well, at least he's smart.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 09/06/12 02:44:50 am Title: Chapter 27 Thoughts a peculaur things...
Poor, innocent Leon, I mean, Trouble. He had no idea the true *trouble* he'd be getting himself into by running into that hospital room.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 09/06/12 02:41:56 am Title: Chapter 26 Laughter...the creepy unatural kind.
You'd think that they'd be used to this by now. Heck, they've had a Gunner under their care for over two days. Heck, not just any Gunner, but Disasteress Rage Fear-Striker Gunner herself. Beat that.
Crazy Female LEPrecon
Date: 08/06/12 02:48:10 pm Title: Chapter 25 Fury
Hey, Root seems fine. Again, don't worry.
Crazy Female LEPrecon