Date: 19/07/07 06:07:05 am Title: Kidnap
EVERYONE'S GONE MISSIN!!!!!!!!!!!!
*cries*
AND I HAVE AN EXAM 2NIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I'M OFF SCHOOL AS WELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*cries x2*
Date: 17/07/07 10:34:02 am Title: Kidnap
Loving this story, you are a real author dude!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: rok on mp!
[Report This]Date: 16/07/07 08:57:43 pm Title: Kidnap
i realy liked it, but I think that buttler would have figered out that the person was there, or he would have heard artemis gasp but i thought it was good
Date: 15/07/07 03:17:08 pm Title: Kidnap
seriously? hmm.....that's strange....
Date: 11/07/07 02:06:25 am Title: Kidnap
oi! Colfer is using H/T in book 6! didn't i tell u that?
Author's Response: No! No u didn't!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *shakes head and sighs!* should upd8 by saturday or sunday!!!
[Report This]Date: 23/06/07 10:41:15 am Title: Dolphins
i love it!! keep going
[Report This]Date: 23/06/07 10:28:37 am Title: Kidnap
i like it!!
Date: 20/06/07 07:18:53 pm Title: Dolphins
It's good. Extremely well-written. Keeps a person interested...unlike about 75% of fan fiction. Really, it's excellent...only a few things that I found a little strange. For one, doesn't it seem a bit crude of Spiro to use that typical, thug-like kidnapping strategy? The whole, nab-the-hostage, stuff-him-in-the-car-and-run strategy? I would have expected something a little more sophisticated in that part just before the car chase there...something, I dunno, that portrays the powerful, reckless insanity that you described so well in his character. Something where he's again trying to prove, once and for all, that he can defeat the reknowned child genius Artemis Fowl on his own intellectual playing field. You also employed a lot of phrases similar to those of Eoin Colfer. Was that intentional? They fit very well in context. Very good...very clever. :) you should keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm not sure that Spiro would have had a calculated plan as such. i was trying to portray him as a man that was once intelligent, but is blinded by anger and dulled by the years spent in prison. I tried to stray as true to colfer style as possible - i myt have gone off that slightly in the H/T shipping tho! anyhow, glad u enjoyed it! lol!
Author's Response: Sorry! i meant stay!(not stray!)
Date: 20/06/07 07:18:52 pm Title: Dolphins
It's good. Extremely well-written. Keeps a person interested...unlike about 75% of fan fiction. Really, it's excellent...only a few things that I found a little strange. For one, doesn't it seem a bit crude of Spiro to use that typical, thug-like kidnapping strategy? The whole, nab-the-hostage, stuff-him-in-the-car-and-run strategy? I would have expected something a little more sophisticated in that part just before the car chase there...something, I dunno, that portrays the powerful, reckless insanity that you described so well in his character. Something where he's again trying to prove, once and for all, that he can defeat the reknowned child genius Artemis Fowl on his own intellectual playing field. You also employed a lot of phrases similar to those of Eoin Colfer. Was that intentional? They fit very well in context. Very good...very clever. :) you should keep going!
Date: 20/06/07 07:18:51 pm Title: Dolphins
It's good. Extremely well-written. Keeps a person interested...unlike about 75% of fan fiction. Really, it's excellent...only a few things that I found a little strange. For one, doesn't it seem a bit crude of Spiro to use that typical, thug-like kidnapping strategy? The whole, nab-the-hostage, stuff-him-in-the-car-and-run strategy? I would have expected something a little more sophisticated in that part just before the car chase there...something, I dunno, that portrays the powerful, reckless insanity that you described so well in his character. Something where he's again trying to prove, once and for all, that he can defeat the reknowned child genius Artemis Fowl on his own intellectual playing field. You also employed a lot of phrases similar to those of Eoin Colfer. Was that intentional? They fit very well in context. Very good...very clever. :) you should keep going!