Date: 08/04/11 04:19:31 pm Title: Juxtaposition
... I don't know if I should be reviewing this because it is liable to get me killed, seeing as I actually... like Minerva. Ack, I'm sorry! So I liked this story just because it actually was a nice story about Minerva that she doesn't die in. But the writing was also very good.
Date: 08/04/11 01:27:23 pm Title: Juxtaposition
I must admit I'm not the biggest A/M fan, but when it's cute, it's CUTE!!!! This is CUTE. I really like Holly's part in it. Black mail is sweet. *is searching for something to correct* Hmm, the pose he made, no matter how proud or smug he is, Artemis would not put his feet up on a table.
"Have you not set Lysander, as in scorn, to follow me and prise my eyes and face?"
Date: 07/04/11 04:51:58 pm Title: Juxtaposition
Well, I actually disagree with you on that. Minerva hasn't been present in the sixth or seventh books, however it seems like it's a plausible ship to take. Did I use that in the correct context?
For the actual review, I find this story intriguing and worthy of a review. I didn't find any conventional errors, however I read it rather fast and didn't look over it carefully enough. I have always been rather fond of Minerva as a character. She was charming and intelligent, and you captured that very well here.
What I really admire is Holly's maternal instinct you've brought out. Holly, around the time of The Eternity Code, seemed to be at least slightly protective of... me?
Excellent story. You really are an excellent writer. However, I must confess. In my "story" about things that anger me, you were one of the newer people I was talking about when I said updating too many stories at once though you're a new writer. I do enjoy this story and hope that in the future you write more stories like this.
Date: 07/04/11 07:28:54 am Title: Juxtaposition
Good job! I like the fact that Holly was spying on them. And they had no idea....or did they?...lol
haha thanks for being one of the first to comment on my stuff! I 'preciate it ;P