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Reviewer: Ary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/12 06:44:21 am Title: 25 The Wedding

That is so beautiful!

Reviewer: Ary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/12 12:52:17 pm Title: 21 A Fist of Ice

some spelling mistakes, but I really like where this is going. Please update soon! :)

Reviewer: Ary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/12 06:34:54 pm Title: 5 Lamentation

Good job, the story's pulling me in already!

Reviewer: Troublelover16 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/05/12 12:15:38 pm Title: 19 Juliet Butler

Oh, don't worry about the not updating stuff. I've had a bad case of writers block for a while now myself. :P

This chapter was pretty good. It made me laugh. Juliet is awesome. She totally freaked out those fairies. lol. :D



Author's Response:

Sorry for not responding in so long, I haven't gotten onto my account for a while. Yeah, she is awesome. I'm not very good at doing things in her POV, but Shadow Huntress convinced me to write from her perspective.

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Reviewer: Troublelover16 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/04/12 10:04:40 am Title: Freedom, Sort of 17

Excellent chapter. This story is really good. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks

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Reviewer: Artyisawesome Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/04/12 06:59:52 pm Title: Freedom, Sort of 17

A when is boi getting out? I cant stand reading sbout such a terrible place. anyways great chapter :)

Author's Response:

Thank you, but you spelled Bio wrong. She will get out soon, Redwood will see her, therefore Artemis will see her, and consequently, they will plan a way to get out.

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Reviewer: Artyisawesome Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/04/12 07:06:55 pm Title: 16 Redwood's room, KEEP OUT!

Good chapter !:) keep updating!:) but he named his coin???????? what the heck?

Author's Response:

Well, yeah, the coin he obsessed over in the last book. She's his spark of decency. Anyway, if you read Shadow Huntress' story, you'll get a better description in there of why. Really, it's my sister's idea. Actually, I get all (or most of) my crazy ideas from her. 

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Reviewer: Sophie_Fowl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/04/12 03:54:27 pm Title: 16 Redwood's room, KEEP OUT!

We think this series is awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you, but who's we? I like it as well, I borrowed the Gunners and the GESF from Dragonwings, but not the Gunner Rangers, the Scientists, or the idea; hope to hear from you soon,

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Reviewer: Troublelover16 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/04/12 06:01:17 am Title: 16 Redwood's room, KEEP OUT!

Oh, it's fine. I haven't updated in forever either. :P

The chapter was excellent and I liked it. I didn't see any mistakes within the chapter, but there is one thing. This chapter was almost exactly the same as the second half of the previous chapter. Did you mean to do that? It's kinda confusing. Personally I like this version better. :)



Author's Response:

Sorry, yes I noticed that, I was trying to do the same thing more from Artemis' point of view. The next chapter, which I'm working on, is going to be in everyone else's point of view.

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Reviewer: Troublelover16 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/03/12 03:23:33 pm Title: 15 The beginning and end of a plan

Geez, Redwood...in a hurry are we? lol. Poor Arty. 

Good chapter! :D

OMG! THE HUNGER GAMES MOVIE WAS AWESOME!!! XD Artylover20 and I went to see it on Sunday too. It was slightly different from the book, but nothing major. They left out Madge and a couple of other things but meh. It was a great movie!!!! :D



Author's Response:

Yeah, I know she is in a rush. And I quite agree on what you said on the hunger games movie. I can not believe that the next one isn't coming out until 2013.

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