[Report This]Date: 18/05/08 04:58:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Wahhhh! I'm kidding, I love sad stories and poems!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 25/01/08 10:04:20 am Title: Chapter 1
hey this book is awesome!
Author's Response: yah...it is an awesome book, thats why i am a writer on this site!
[Report This]Date: 14/10/07 08:28:59 am Title: Chapter 1
I love the fifth uh stanza I think. It's awesome! ^_^ You're soooooooo good at emotion that it's almost scary! I love it! ^_^
Author's Response:
I want to thank the academy...and Oh yea Olivia for being there for me and just thank you...Yea World Peace! ^ ^
Date: 24/08/07 05:49:04 am Title: Chapter 1
*disappear
Author's Response: oops sorry I thought I spelled that right. oh well thanks for catching my mistake.
[Report This]Date: 30/06/07 06:15:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
The last sentence seems too cheery and out of place. A lot of sentences conflict. The fifth verse (or stanza?... it's hard to distinguish here) is the best. Deep and meaningful.
Author's Response: Thanks I guess.
Date: 29/06/07 07:23:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like it! sorry, i thought i'd reviewed. anyway, this one is one of my faves of your poems.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 22/06/07 08:22:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh, dark. Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am glad you reviewed it b/c i was about to take it off the site. I thought nobody liked it.