Date: 03/08/12 02:09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Skeem" is spelled wrong. It's "scheme."
Yeah, it is kinda mushy. I really think this is OOC. Really OOC. Artemis may be "under the influence" (Yeah, I know, wrong influence) but he probably wouldn't be so forthright with his emotions. He'd probably be more awkward and embarrassed, not really sure how to handle it. A good poem, I just really don't think it applies to Artemis Fowl the Second.
Date: 06/08/07 03:39:50 am Title: Chapter 1
erm well the rhyming isn't so great but it is very good anyway. well done lol
Author's Response: Well what if it was free verse that techinically doesn't mean it has to rhyme. Awe Im jk. ^ ^ and thanks for the review anyways.
Date: 30/06/07 10:20:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmm... the last line is a bit of a conflict. Still, quite well written."Skeems" is spelled "schemes.
Author's Response: thanks you. I meant for it to be a conflict and thank you for telling me I misspelled schemes.