Date: 03/08/12 02:09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Skeem" is spelled wrong. It's "scheme."
Yeah, it is kinda mushy. I really think this is OOC. Really OOC. Artemis may be "under the influence" (Yeah, I know, wrong influence) but he probably wouldn't be so forthright with his emotions. He'd probably be more awkward and embarrassed, not really sure how to handle it. A good poem, I just really don't think it applies to Artemis Fowl the Second.
Date: 01/11/08 02:44:00 am Title: Chapter 1
omg! Its so romantic!
[Report This]Date: 13/06/08 02:45:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude, nice! Me likey!
Author's Response: thanks!
[Report This]Date: 14/10/07 08:50:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it! oh yeah! ^_^
Author's Response: Hand falling off... writing back too many thank you's...but it feels so good. Thanks Olivia...ah man my hand fell off..lol
Date: 06/08/07 03:39:50 am Title: Chapter 1
erm well the rhyming isn't so great but it is very good anyway. well done lol
Author's Response: Well what if it was free verse that techinically doesn't mean it has to rhyme. Awe Im jk. ^ ^ and thanks for the review anyways.
[Report This]Date: 30/06/07 10:20:20 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmm... the last line is a bit of a conflict. Still, quite well written."Skeems" is spelled "schemes.
Author's Response: thanks you. I meant for it to be a conflict and thank you for telling me I misspelled schemes.
Date: 22/06/07 08:27:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow first time ever i hear feelings like THAT from arty!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 16/06/07 08:32:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! You are really good at writing poetry. i could never write something as good as that!
Author's Response: Thank you.