Summary: [Oneshot.] Your name is real. Your lies are real. Our...no...your power is real. You have a responsibility to protect your family and their wealth. Dreams will only hinder you. Fowls do not dream.
Categories: Stories
Characters: Artemis Fowl Jnr.
Genres: General
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 1002 Read Count: 1049
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[Report This] Published: 04/08/06 Updated: 04/08/06
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed 
Date: 06/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Fowl
Date: 06/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Fowl
Too short. The beggining manages to explain in detail a whole lot of nothing. The rest is not much better. A valiant attempt, but does not bring across the point of the story. I suggest making an expanded story, as short stories are often much more difficult to articulate for the amateur writer. No offense meant of course.
Summary:
Categories: Stories
Characters: Artemis Fowl Jnr., Holly Short, Trouble Kelp
Genres: Angst, Drama, Het Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Twelve Labours of Hercules
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8319 Read Count: 1195
When the fall is all that remains for Commander Trouble Kelp, the fall is all that matters. [Trouble/Holly, Holly/Artemis]
Categories: Stories
Characters: Artemis Fowl Jnr., Holly Short, Trouble Kelp
Genres: Angst, Drama, Het Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Twelve Labours of Hercules
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8319 Read Count: 1195
[Report This] Published: 06/08/06 Updated: 06/08/06
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Bravo again. You've struck gold this time. I've said it once, i'll say it again. You would be an excellent novelist.
Summary: A monologue from Artemis' POV. He's rather troubled, considering how Dana MacCaugry cornered him in the changing room and kissed him, then walked away without explanation. A prologue to the Forty Two universe.
[Winner of the Best Slash Romance and Best Short Fic, Orion Awards 2001-2005]
Categories: Stories
Characters: Artemis Fowl Jnr.
Genres: General, Slash Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Forty Two
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3239 Read Count: 666
[Winner of the Best Slash Romance and Best Short Fic, Orion Awards 2001-2005]
Categories: Stories
Characters: Artemis Fowl Jnr.
Genres: General, Slash Romance
Warnings: None
Series: Forty Two
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3239 Read Count: 666
[Report This] Published: 08/08/06 Updated: 08/08/06
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 08/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 08/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
HOW DARE YOU. 6 MONTHS AND YOU NEVER TOOK MY SCAM SERIOUSLY. DEATH TO OBAMA!
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: 07/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Before reading my review, you should know that I am not homophobic. However I am a merciless reviewer, as I am an accomplished novelist. I do not read many short stories, but this one struck me particularly. The romantic interface of this story moves me little, however that is merely my nature. The writing style though I give much credit to. You are able to capture the scene without overdoing it with the detail. The way this story has been typed makes it captivating, not necessarily the content. I would care to see more work from you, perhaps a novel. I believe with some practice you could be a very successful novelist. Bravo.
Summary: 
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- Will Artemis choose to help Spin, the ruthless leader of this band of teenagers?
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In the heat of the Arizona desert a monster is born . . .
. . . and it's not Artemis Fowl.
This is the moment the Extendedes had waited for. After years of planning and three days worth of anticipation, now is the time for Artemis to make his decision.
- Or will he choose the far easier path and return home with Butler leaving the Extendedes to fend for themselves?
The choice is with the adolesent Artemis Fowl II, a choice which could annihilate an endangered race, or change the balence of power in both the human and fairy world.
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Categories: Stories
Characters: Artemis Fowl Jnr.
Genres: Suspense
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 80749 Read Count: 7107
[Report This] Published: 11/11/08 Updated: 06/07/09
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 13: Extendedes Eden
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed my story so far dispite the grammer and spelling mistakes. What are the ideas that you believe I must expand on? One more thing, if the ideas are to blossum later, then why must I expaned on them now? Please explain . . . Thanks! ;-)
Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 13: Extendedes Eden
This extended story contains interesting ideas. I will exclude the grammatical and spelling errors as they are not horrible enough to change the meaning of the story. However, I will point out that the story requires a more extensive explaination of the ideas that are planted in this story so they may truly blossum when the time has come. Other than that is was a delightful read and i look forward to either a revision or a future extension.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed my story so far dispite the grammer and spelling mistakes. What are the ideas that you believe I must expand on? One more thing, if the ideas are to blossum later, then why must I expaned on them now? Please explain . . . Thanks! ;-)
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 15/07/09 Title: Chapter 43: LEP Report
Date: 15/07/09 Title: Chapter 43: LEP Report
The ending was...cheesy. Cheesy and rushed. You tried to compile the contents of some 3 or 4 chapters into 1 or 2. However, i can understand you wanted to get it out of the way. However, I was most displeased!
Author's Response: You think so? I acctually wasn't trying to get it out of the way, I appoligize because I didn't know that it gave off that kind'of feel . . . ;-) Really????
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 15/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
Author's Response: True I knew you'd like that . . . ;-)
Date: 15/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
ANOTHER however, I like the fact that they all die. :D
Author's Response: True I knew you'd like that . . . ;-)
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 15/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
Date: 15/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Arrival
After reading a few of the earlier reviews I feel kind of guilty. I've actually been allowing these people to view my beautiful artistic quality of writing? Even in my reviews?! Seriously though, I might have been a bit harsh with my first review of the ending. It has its qualities. It certainly finishes it off cleanly and permanently. So i guess it was not all that bad after all. :D
Author's Response: Ohhhhhhh so sweet!!!! Oh it's so cute!!!!
On futher review myself I realize how it could be preseved as rushed. After all it would be expected that, considering my previous chapters, the ending would be long with all sorts of explainations and such. Anyway, that said, what's done is done and though I had acctually been considering writing another chapter the amount of reviews anouncing it was over were enough for me to reconsider.
It has gone on a bit long don't you agree? I have the longest story on this site, and it's three days in the middle of the desert.
Thanks for reconsidering, do you think I should add another chapter to finish it off more? It would kind of bee the same as the current "Last Chapter" however from a different point of view.
Wait, what do you mean by, "beautiful artistic quality of writing?"
;-)
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 25/06/09 Title: Chapter 39: White Ribbons
Date: 25/06/09 Title: Chapter 39: White Ribbons
Alrighty I'm back and reviewing! Sorry it has been so long. I've been quite busy with my Macroeconomics course. What I've seen since I last reviewed is...a whole lot of spelling and grammatical errors! I still have 39-...the rest of the chapters to read, but I cannot do that now! Until next I review!
Author's Response: Oh Bluffalo how cute. Where're you taking it? SCC? PVCC? I'm taking a spanish course, por supuesto.
Are there really that many errors? Which chapter are you on? Oh 39, hehe my bad, I didn't see that . . . :D Anyway, I'm so glad you're back. I hope you like the way the plot is going if you have anything else you'd like to share about this feel free to email me!!! ;-)
Reviewer: Bluffalo Signed
Date: 25/06/09 Title: Chapter 39: White Ribbons
Author's Response: Cool I'm there two, wait! Macro Econ?? I also took that seriously, I almost did!!! My parents thought it would be to difficult for a summer class, though I disagreed. How is it?
Date: 25/06/09 Title: Chapter 39: White Ribbons
I'm taking the course at PVCC. As for the song.......................................
Anyway I'll look over the new chapters and see if the plot is to my liking... Until then, Ciao!
Author's Response: Cool I'm there two, wait! Macro Econ?? I also took that seriously, I almost did!!! My parents thought it would be to difficult for a summer class, though I disagreed. How is it?
Good, wait, Ciao? You going somewhere this summer? CAN I COME!!!!!! ;-) *puppy dog eyes*